I think they are great, nothing wrong with them. It's very artistic!
this may come off witchy of me to say but being a photographers daughter doesn't exactly mean you know everything about photography. I'm a Nurses daughter but does that mean I can give shots and put in I.V.'s? My dad owns a construction company but I don't know jack about building things. Again, don't mean to offend, but it irritates me when people criticize other people because their father/mother/grandparent etc. was/is savvy in what they are criticizing.
Excuse my b*tchyness... im just in a very irritated mood... pms
let me start by saying that i was not being rude.
i was simply giving constructive criticism, photography is so much different than that of a nurse or construction job, in those lines of work 90% of the work you do is cookie cutter work. in photography it is art, and, in alot of people's eyes art means alot to them. by saying that i am a photographers daughter, i mean i was there side by side with my dad he taught me about how lights are positioned just right to get the effect you want. he taught me about capturing the moment. he taught me about developing the film, what kind of chemicals to use, what not to use, i was with him in the dark room, developing pictures step by step. in your case Maya ( if that is ok to call you), being a daughter to a nurse, due to legal reasons and health reasons you are not allowed to be there to learn those things, you need to go to school for them. same with construction. legal stuff.
as for being a photo daughter ( if you will), i was able to have my lead me in the direction of photo taking, he took me to weddings, out on shoots to different places, he taught me about what colors, shapes sizes to use to get the desired color and effect i wanted.
again, i was not being savvy as you put it, just like if you were a daughter/son to a chef, painter,or cake designer, or web designing, you can be there hands on learning. however, with jobs like nursing, construction, building, and such, it is all a safety thing as well as legal. i am not saying i am better than any body, and the OP said she did not mind people giving her comments ( good or bad).
hope you get off your PMS soon, and see that i am not being rude.